Friday, January 29, 2010

3 point paragraph - My favorite ways to enjoy a Saturday

Today, while we were doing Shurley English, I wrote this time ordered form of a 3 point paragraph. This was my first attempt at writing one.


I have three favorite ways to enjoy a Saturday. These ways are drawing a horse, coloring a picture and taking the dogs for a walk. First, I like to draw horses. I like drawing horses because they remind me of Mia, the horse I ride. Second, I like to color pictures. I never get bored coloring. I like to imagine different reasons why the pictures are the way they are. Third, I like to take the dogs for a walk. It is always fun to look at their faces and say what you think the dogs would be saying if they could speak.
I like to draw horses, color pictures and take the dogs for a walk because they all require imagination.

I love writing and Shurley English is teaching me how to write well.

2 comments:

landrethp said...

Miss Priss, your writing is great. Please share with me other topics and how you write them. I am trying to teach my 3rd graders how to be as good a writer as you.

Miss Priss said...

This is Shira. I am very happy to be an example for your students. My brother and I are using a curriculum called Shurley English. I hope you find this helpful.